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Page 45 to 60 of Your Screenplay X
By Don Vasicek
October, 2006, 09:00

From page 45 to about 60, your main character should be acting, not reacting.
n this screenplay educational series IN will be covering the following course sections of information graciously provided by Donald L. Vasicek:

  • So, You Have A Movie Idea - I
  • More on Your Movie Idea II
  • Emotion and Your Movie Idea III
  • The Logline IV
  • The First Minute V
  • Write The End To Your Screenplay Foremost VI
  • The First Twelve Pages of Your Screenplay VII
  • Page 12 to Page 30 of Your Screenplay VIII
  • Page 30 to Page 45 of Your Screenplay IX
  • Page 45 to Page 60 of Your Screenplay X
  • Page 60 to Page 75 of Your Screenplay XI
  • Page 90 to the End of Your Screenplay XII

Don't miss out on a single issue of IN and how to get your screenplay from the page to the silver screen.

In well-written movies, at the black moment, or just before the end of your screenplay, your main character should be confronted by your villain in a situation that shows your main character with no chance to win. It is here that your main character should experience an epiphany.

This means that he is faced with what he has been trying to overcome throughout your screenplay. Here, just before the end, the obstacle is the largest one yet that you have had him encounter. If he overcomes this one, he will accomplish his goal, win, transform and you can end your movie by sending your audience out of the theater with smiles on their faces and/or tears in their eyes.

You begin writing this at about page 45 of your screenplay. You show your main character doing something, or saying something that foreshadows the way he will be at the end of the movie after he transforms. From page 45 of your screenplay to about page 60, show your main character acting, instead of reacting. From page 45 on, your main character must be proactive. He must drive all of the action. He must be in position where everyone is now reacting to him.

At the same time, you must have your villain getting stronger. From page 45 to 60 your main character has taken control now, and you must show that the villain realizes this. So, you show your villain up the stakes by becoming more powerful himself. You can do this by showing your villain's evil side. From now on, your villain is going to have to resort to even more evil means to defeat your main character.

You must show your villain hammering your main character into virtual submission. As you write this, you must also show your main character being proactive and getting stronger. By page 60, you should have your main character totally destroyed where the only thing he has left is his will to win, to achieve his goal.

In my next installment, I'll take you from page 60 to page 75 of your screenplay.

Thank you for dropping by.
Good writing to you!
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Donald L. Vasicek was a writer/consultant for Warriors of Virtue, screenwriter for The Crown, writer/associate producer for The Lost Heart and Born To Kill. He wrote, directed, and produced Faces, Oh, The Places You Can Go..., Haunted World and the award-winning The Sand Creek Massacre. He writes columns for Hollywood Lit. Sales, Moondance Int'l Film Festival's E-zine, Screenplace, Screenwriters Forum, Screenplayers.Net, Screenwriters Utopia, Ink-On–The-Brain and Spraka & Kinsla (Swedish). Author of How To Write, Sell, And Get Your Screenplays Produced ( and The Write Focus. Web site:

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